Sunday, February 19, 2006

A collaborative Internet Poem I wrote a verse for...



SUN KILL MOON

Darkest hours
Darkest night
Deathly silence
Darkness height

Darkest is the
Dress of dreary
Dastardly killing in
Deadly fury

Darkest sun
Encompass all
Fiery cold
Moon must fall

Dimly lit sky
Buring brightly
Damning facade
Sinning slightly

Luna, my moon, so much I adore
Thou shall stay forevermore?
The sun that I thee abhor
So much hatred, useless metaphor

cradle not its fallen crest
under mornlight none shall rest
revealed to all, these acts of violence
sows unrest, the deadly silence

Mean Helios awaits
Turning of tide he baits
Up ashore the sea light
Moon weeps, Sun is blithe

take me to thy waves
sweep away this pain
as the sun gradually kills
the dark moon again

Funky Banana We worship You,
Funky Banana they Eat You,
Banana on a Stick without a clue,
Poisoned, Dark, Deathly, Funky Banana will KILL You

This last verse was crafted by own subtle hand...

This fine poem was word forged on the site of Sorrow X by his many readers and fellow poets.

24 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is this guy still around?

07:26  
Anonymous Wirewool Mullet said...

Your poems seem to get more stupid every day.

07:28  
Blogger the cloned corpse of marcus tal said...

Wirewool Mullet,

I see you have dropped your crude vernacular for this current visit at least...

Stupid is a much misunderstood word. I will rectify this...

07:52  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Where have all the Macaroons gone ?

07:54  
Anonymous RAF Bentwaters Crew said...

Looks like we got ourselves a convoy. Let's move on through the night and meet up with the birds from Croughton's Officer's club soon.

Over and out.

08:25  
Anonymous The Flying Dutchman said...

Marshall

Will

& Holly

On a routine expedition

Met the greatest Earthquake ever known.

High on the rapids

It struck their tiny raft

And sent them down

A thousand feet below

To: ????????????????

The clues are there and only your lastest visitors can provide them.

08:32  
Anonymous Chaka said...

clue.........

Chaka on one side.

Pakuni on other side

Chaka lone

08:47  
Anonymous Ground Control to Major Tom said...

SOS SOS SOS SOS

Major Tom of RAF Bentwaters... repeat Major Tom of RAF Bentwaters...

The Dehydrated Corpse's stash of proze winning macaroons are under attack.

Innccoommmiiinnnggg! Help us!

NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...............!

10:46  
Anonymous USAF Ground Control said...

Air support on it's way.

RAF Mildenhall (check)
RAF Lakenheath (check
RAF Upper Heyford (check)
RAF Bentwaters (check)
RAF Fairford (check)
RAF Croughton (no check)

Note1: The Birds at RAF Croughton's officer club are still partying with the Americans so count them out.

Note2: For those who may not know, all these RAF locations are staffed and manned by your friendly, neighborhood United States Air Force and are always close and ready to an English town near you, so please bow and show respect the next time your local American Airman says "Howdy Partner!"

Now, back to our story.

Clone, we're on our way, and Americans save the day again.

Note3: Shameless Nationalist Plug for America (I love this place)

11:42  
Anonymous 2nd Cousin of the Cloned Corpse of Marcus Tal said...

Cousin Clone,

We all know this is chuffin Scruffy American pretending to be someone else so he can just Poop over England with his abrasively Pro-American comments.

Can you not do something about this? I find it highly offensive that he insults our Jolly Old England. Those Darn Yanks think they run this place but they don't. Remember, they are nothing but Spunky Backpacks as far as I'm concerned.

Anyways, Aunt May said she'll bring up some new Macaroons to replace the old ones she ate.

See you at tea and crumpets on Wednesday. Oh, by the way, did you see the fabulous movie, Match point with all those views of London. It gave me shivers of the old days when I used to be on the dole in London, getting my handouts of cheese and bread. Anyways, I'm babbling now.

12:42  
Blogger The dehydrated corpse of Marcus Tal said...

2nd cloned cousin...make sure auntie may brings some of her above average home made marmalade with her macaroons.

USAF ground control...have no fear myself and my cloned brethren are only too familiar with the works of youse guys in the 3rd USAF. In a show of transatlantic co-operation I have laboured long and hard today for the benefit of those civilian workers employed at RAF Mildenhall.

Soon the Macaroons will be upon us.

12:06  
Anonymous GS-15 Smith said...

I thought you looked familiar. It was the hairpiece that gave it away.

12:33  
Anonymous Pro-American Bully-Boy said...

Clone, are you saying that you are a local national employee at one of the imperialist American bases in our lovely teapot of England?

Are you collaberating with those Americans who start wars overseas only to make the price of gasoline go down so they can make a buck.

I used to read your site but now I think I won't because you are a supporter of Americans.

Note: This was just a caricature of how STUPID foreigners who are anti-American can be. We just grow tired of them, but really the CLONE should be honored for his service towards America.

Because, Britain and America will ALWAYS be allies. I would support til the death my British Brothers no matter what!!!

God Bless America and God Save the Queen of England

23:17  
Anonymous Bond (James Bond) said...

For the love of Pete, will you stop SUCKING!!!

Misguided nationalism will not get you any favors with the Clone or the Corpse of MT.

23:19  
Anonymous THE NEMESIS-ENFORCER OF MARCUS TAL'S CORPSE said...

Silence FOOLS...

NOW PASS ME A MACAROON

07:05  
Anonymous Wirewool Mullet said...

Maybe I have been wrong about you. I think I'm in love with your poems now. Forgive me for all my nasty comments.

08:51  
Anonymous Wirewool Mullet said...

FUCKING IMPOSTERS DIE IN HELL...
i'LL FUCKING KILL YOU MATRE

09:24  
Anonymous THE NEMESIS-ENFORCER OF MARCUS TAL'S CORPSE said...

I'll gouge out your eyes, urinate down the tatters of your ripped throat and wrench the mullet from your skull you crass little man.

I AM THE NEMESIS ENFORCER OF MARCUS TAL'S CORPSE

Look upon my fists and bleed

10:19  
Blogger The dehydrated corpse of Marcus Tal said...

Pro American bully boy - I am saying no such thing, however tommorrow I have to do works for a lucky lady at Lakenheath.

Spreading the joy of Marcus Tal.

and of course macaroons

10:52  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I thought it was Mildenhall? What gives?

11:18  
Blogger The dehydrated corpse of Marcus Tal said...

My labours are for the good of all civilian workers in US Airbases in the UK.

My generosity cannot be confined to one base, afterall I have many Macaroons to share.

10:59  
Anonymous Tin Foil Hat Wearing Black Helicopter Groupee said...

What about the UFOs at Bentwaters. Can you shed any light on that one?

22:28  
Anonymous THE NEMESIS-ENFORCER OF MARCUS TAL'S CORPSE said...

I put it there for safe-keeping. It is taken out every so often for a spin to the moon and back.

Unfortunately now you know this you will have to DIE

04:55  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

NO

23:42  

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